He lay in a cheap hotel bed as she lay in the street, dying.
After they laid him in the morgue and her to rest, they found the truth lying in a drawer.
Thirty-three words on love gone wrong, minus love, sad, tears, wept, heart, and pain for this week’s Trifextra. Oh, and this is a true story.
11 thoughts on “Betrayal”
Aaargh! I know that you only had 33 words, but you can’t say this is a true story and leave it at that. Please say there will be a follow up post. Pretty please?
Of course! I love requests.
I HAVE to know how this ends! And true story? Wow, that is tragic 🙁
Very Noir. Great job!
Very nice. There are so many possible explanations, and they are all intriguing.
Very dark! Big story in so few words!
What suspense! I’m with the others… I want to know what the truth in the drawer was 🙂
What? What’s in the drawer?????
Ah dude, a cliffhanger like that…!
Ouch that serum of syringe bliss.. in the drawer…
Wow – intriguing and I definitely want to know more too.
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