29 thoughts on “Just a girl

  1. My friend tried doing that once and fell as we got off the train.Made for an interesting moment. 😉

    I like the imagery here, easy to see.

    1. Thanks! What a nice compliment coming from you. I always admire your writing, but I can’t comment on your blog because I don’t have an appropriate account. 🙁

  2. Waited to see how you would weave the prompt in. Lovely touch at the end! And yeah, he probably deserved the finger 😉

  3. You’ve really got a knack for getting into a character’s voice. I loved the detail about the Vergenstein shirt – it made me think this might have actually happened to you. Thanks for gargleblasting it!

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