Sheâ€™s my obsession.
Sheâ€™s a graceful red flash against gray concrete. Her hood is low over her glinting silver eyes, hiding her sleek interior. Sheâ€™s small, strong, and fierce. She hugs her turn and disappears, reappearing seconds later.
Sheâ€™s everywhere at once.
17 thoughts on “A smooth ride”
You have an amazing voice.
love this and the new look.
it was very Red Riding Hood(ish)
you hooked me with “She’s my obsession” and finished me off with “she’s everywhere”
I’m glad you liked it!
Nice job with the imagery, and the loved the contrast with the girl in the photo too.
I love reading your takes on the prompts. This was very clever!
Yep…what they all said.
Very nice. Even with the picture, I’m not 100% sure you’re talking about a woman vs a very nice sports car. I like that ambiguity – your metaphor worked really well. 🙂 Thanks for linking up!
Yes, woman or car? I love the ambiguity linking two seemingly different types of obsession that actually have a fair bit in common.
ooh,” glinting silver eyes”-very mysterious and engaging take on the prompt-enjoyed reading it:-)
A prose poem with lots of color…
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