Mornin, miss. Lemme show ya where ya headed. Go on’n follow that ocean breeze downa 1 straighta Coconut Grove. Ditch the wheels’n chill. Ya gotta cool your mind. Go on, do what ya wanna. Nothin matters, it’s all good.
Miss, are ya listenin?
My response to this week’s Gargleblaster: Which way to go?
11 thoughts on “Illumination”
Follow the ocean breeze and cool your mind…I’m in!
the last line nails it
Ditch the wheels n chill. Love that!
I read it again while listening to the song–sweet…
Ditched! Love this, Christi!
You are so good with dialect – I love the sound of this. I also think it’s advice we could all stand to take now and then. “Ditch the wheels… Do what ya wanna…” Great piece – thanks for sharing it!
Nicely done. The last line does it. Great piece!
Love the language.
Wow the song certainly does establish a mood. I wonder why this song sprung to mind for this challenge? My bet is a nice memory from the past.
This was fun! â™¥
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