13 thoughts on “Go ahead

  1. I love this. “Truth is the dirty knife in your hand” really got me. I equally enjoyed how you ended with a question as opposed to a statement. Wonderfully done.

  2. I love the way the title sets this piece up….like a challenge in the face of the dirty knife of truth. Very powerful.

  3. I liked the bars of rage…and how the fear is what causes the rage. Also, how you open and close with a taunt. A nicely wrapped, gritty little package.

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