26 thoughts on “Fatherly advice

  1. I love the father’s voice! It sounded so genuine. I could definitely feel the father-son dynamic here. Great job!

  2. This is why I love short fic. Perfect little vignettes like this. I can hear the voices, smell the exhaust from the bus, see what they’re wearing…

  3. Awesome. Love the voice in this. You somehow managed to tell us an awful lot about that character. It’s hard to believe we had the same 42 words to work with.

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